Any dinosaur stories to share? (Can be either fiction or non-fiction)

[GojiraGuy1954]

Here's one I wrote yesterday, based on WWD

Walking with Dinosaurs: Death Of A Dynasty- T. Rex Attack


NARRATOR: After trekking across the ash fields, Edmontosaurus gather round a stagnant pool to drink and feed. Huge batteries of chewing teeth make short work of the vegetation.

[A Tyrannosaurus is lurking in the treeline.]

NARRATOR: Once again, the predators make the water's edge a dangerous place.

[The Tyrannosaurus starts to growl quietly, staring at the herbivores with an intent to kill]

NARRATOR: The group senses danger and starts to break up.
NARRATOR: The mother Tyrannosaurus has broken her fast and is back with a vengeance.

[The Tyrannosaurus bursts out of the trees, showcasing its dark colouring and matted coat of quills down its back. It snarls, jaws wide, wet, yellow teeth glistening in the light.]

NARRATOR: All but two of the Edmontosaurus flee.

[The Tyrannosaurus backs them towards the deep lake. One puts its foot down on the soggy bank, but the wet dirt collapses under the weight, causing the frightened herbivore to retract it.]

NARRATOR: The Tyrannosaurus' attack is fast and intimidating.

[One of the hadrosaurs manages to run around the ferocious carnivore. The bloodlusted predator snaps at the tail of the fleeing Edmontosaurus, but doesn't manage to clamp its jaws around it.]

NARRATOR: The Tyrannosaurus looks to the remaining herbivore.

[The T. Rex lunges forward, clamping its monstrous teeth around the doomed creature's neck, ripping through muscle, splitting arteries and crushing bone.]

NARRATOR: The Edmontosaurus coughs and splutters, drowning on its own blood.

[The herbivore then goes limp.]

[The Tyrannosaurus clamps its jaws around the corpse's head, dragging it back into the forest.]



(P.S. You are allowed to comment what you think of this story (as well as posting your own stories) below! I want to improve on my writing and i thought that posting this on the forum and getting tips would help me do so.)

[Shonisaurus]

Honestly it is a very ingenious narrative representing the cruelty of nature and reminds me a lot of the documentaries of animals that they cast on television. It reflects the violent hunt of a predator (in this case tyrannosaurus rex) attacking two edmontosaurus, in the end one falls under the power of tyrannosaurus rex is a reflection of the wild nature of the Cretaceous period that would surely occur daily.

It reminds me of lion documentaries hunting zebras. The story is very realistic. I congratulate you.