Achillobator portrait wip

[antorbitalfenestrae]

So for my Drawing class, we choose a theme to create a body of work around for the year, and I chose paleoart as my theme (and trying to create art that is scientifically accurate, imaginative, and aesthetically successful). My current project is an Achillobator portrait in oil pastels-- it's eventually going to have a fully white background, and sticking its nose in the feathers on its shoulder. (the feathers will be more defined and very shaggy and fluffy, think an Old World vulture.) Sorry for the crappy picture quality, it's a phone camera.

Details:

What do you guys think? Any critiques/suggestions/compliments?

[Rathalosaurus]

Good looking so far.
But, isn't its lower jaw a bit too "box-shaped". IMAO of course.

[antorbitalfenestrae]

But, isn't its lower jaw a bit too "box-shaped".

What do you mean? If it looks like the end is cut off, it is, that part is going to be covered by feathers. Also, we don't have any Achillobator skulls, so it's hard to know the exact proportions I guess...

[Rain]

Looks great so far! Keep us updated 

[Rathalosaurus]

Ok. I didn't see the covering. Very nice picture anyway.

[LophoLeeVT]

awesome!